Something which we all picked up from this tutorial was that the way we did the 500 words was wrong. I need to chose just one of the 3 experiments to write about. I am thinking of mainly focusing on either the swan or the golden apples.
Review from Emma Fawcett
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Emma stated that I didnt use any references. Which is something that I forgot about when writing my first draft. It something which I really need to do for my final. She also noticed several spelling and grammar mistakes which she helped fix
Emma stated that I didnt use any references. Which is something that I forgot about when writing my first draft. It something which I really need to do for my final. She also noticed several spelling and grammar mistakes which she helped fix
Review from Zachary Freiberg
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Zach also notest the same things that Emma did. He noted that I need to talk more about the wider social and cultural ‘structure of feeling’
Zach also notest the same things that Emma did. He noted that I need to talk more about the wider social and cultural ‘structure of feeling’
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